January 20, 2012

Poetry DRILL

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Poetry DRILL

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Poetry DRILL
Most occupations and vocations have drills or exercises to help those new to job or to renew lost interest, and so there is, appropriately in an anagram, a poetry DRILL.

D- Dare to dream and look at everything from a different point of view or several points at the same time without losing a central focus.  Basically, just don’t take time to smell the roses- be the rose. Write how you bloom, the irony of the thorns to reach beauty.  I once wrote a poem about a fire plug on a street near a school.  What has it seen and the changes in the children over the year, and how did it feel when it saw dog come near?  How many times was it used by firemen, or how many times has it been painted?  Here’s where the imagination plays, and creativity has the space to explore the not so obvious.

R- Realize that your audience is not roses or fire plugs: its people who want to expand their thoughts or horizons, and poets or other kinds of writers can help them.  Also writer need an audience for their work, so it’s a good relationship that exists under the right conditions.  Know your audience and written work has to be real enough for the audience to accept the surrealism of it all- Did Alice really go through that looking glass and meet a bunch of strange characters at a tea party? Did George Lucas take us a time far into the future with even more strange aliens?

I – Investigate the possibilities of your subject of the poem and use the creative processes to accomplish this.  One draft is not a masterpiece. Inspire other with work you do, and you can be inspired to be more of a writer or poet at the same time. Illuminate light on subjects that are considered to be plain or ordinary since they are really the things and experiences we deal with every day.  The fantasy is winning the lottery and never having to work again, but the reality is what we have to do to earn the money to buy that lottery ticket.

L - Love what you do. This thought inspired Steve Jobs to change the world with his electronic machines. As writer’s, be willing to take a risk and learn about new things and places since writers write about what they know.  Experience is always the best teacher, but we can learn from other people’s experiences and make them our own as a base for developing a style of writing that you call your own the more you write.  There is a say that inspiration is 90 percent perspiration, or effort.

L - Use language to your advantage.  As an English teacher for multi-grades including college, words are powerful, and there are many historical examples where people have risen to fame or lost their power use to the information in words.  Also use language beyond the basics of sentence structure, capitalization, spelling and punctuation.  Like a musician who struggles to learn the notes for an instrument, there comes a time when the basics are mastered and like breathing the instrument becomes a part of the person playing it, taking the creativity to new levels of professionalism.  Know the basics intuitively before you start breaking the rules.  Writers can break the rules, but there has to be a reason for it other than ignorance.  Writers make up new words or apply new meanings to old words, and that is what keeping language as a living thing.  Who would have known what Internet meant in the 1930’s?  Also here’s a note about the use of profanity in writing. I believe there are enough words in the English language to where use of profanity is the exception, not the rule.  Its use depends on the audience being served, and the intended effect .  E.E. Cummings knew the basics of writing, but he broke the rules for distinct reasons.  I’m sure if he had to write a regular essay, he would use more periods.

This is the writer’s DRILL.

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January 15, 2012

View from My Backyard

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View from My Back Yard

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(Photos by Mike Hall)

With the thermometer at 23 degrees F., snow fell for a second day in Indianapolis on January14.  My backyard, which is a vegetated drainage area for the apartment complex, becomes a trip to the woods as the ground is covered by the snow.  The melted water keeps the little creek trickling through the area.

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January 9, 2012

It’s time to cash in all of my chips

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It’s time to cash in all of my chips 

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(Illustration by Mike Hall)
It’s time to cash in all of my chips 

It’s time to cash in all of my chips,
And bet the rest of my life on your bliss.
I always want to be able to touch your
Lips and treasure every kiss.
I want to see your jeans hug your hips,
And watch you walk with a cute twist.
I know I’m taking a big risk, but you’re
The kind of woman on my list
Of someone I’d want to spend
The rest of my life with.

It’s time to cash in all of my chips,
Even though I could play longer
And I could strike it rich, but
There’s a good chance I could
Make a wrong move and lose it all,
And I would be all alone when
I’d take the fall.
Then it would have been just a game,
And my life would stay the same.
It’s time to cash in all of my chips,
And there’s a reason for the change.
It was a special day when I first
Saw you come my way, and if
You hadn’t been there,
I’d continue to play and have nothing
Now to say.

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December 30, 2011

Free Open Poetry Forum expands

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Free Open Poetry Forum expands

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For 2012, I would like to take a small detour in the direction of The World of Words by Elias Tobias and significantly expand the reader contributions, as it has been suggested by comments about the blog.  In March of 2007, I began the Free Open Poetry Forum the encourage people to submit poems for others to read.  While the Forum is still around, it has not been used as much as anticipated.
I imagine the forum being a virtual coffeehouse where ideas could be exchanged for the benefit of the readers of the poetry blog. I would like to keep this concept and expand it to beyond poetry to other types of submissions, such as regular guest writers with columns.  All material appearing first on The World of Words by Elias Tobias would be part of the collective copyright of this blog, however any further publication rights beyond the first compilation rights would belong to the original authors.  All published material from contributing authors would be subject to editing by The World of Words by Elias Tobias.

So get your cup of coffee and look a few rules, first. The  Free Open Poetry Forum on the World of Words  by Elias Tobias can include material on most any subject  related  to poetry using any form or style (or lack thereof), in English, and must be original material by the author making the submission. There is no financial benefit for approved submissions.
Length can vary depending of the work, but poems should be no more than 30 or 35 lines. All material can be emailed to contact@eliastobias.net and the material will be reviewed by the webmaster. Type “Free Poetry Forum Submission” in the subject line, as I we receive many other email messages. Sharp, clear photos of the authors may accompany a poem with a brief background of the author.  Also you should send a few poems at a time and work should be your best work.

All material for the Free Open Poetry Forum will be linked to the category with that name on the right side of the page so people can find their work easier, and those who have multiple regular submission such as columns may have their own category.  Of course, all material in this site can be found by the internal search box, also on the right side of the page.
Like most public Web sites, such as those connected with universities, poetry will not be accepted if it is:
1.    Racist or discriminatory to any race, ethnicity or country of origin.
2.    Sexually explicit or pornographic.
3.    Extremely violent in nature or it displays excessive use of profanity.
4.    Terroristic in nature or supportive of terrorist activity.

After an article or poem is posted, the author retains further publishing rights, and only first publishing rights are claimed by this Web site since the entire contents are copyrighted by the Webmaster. Whether the comments are positive or negative, it is the hope the open poetry forum serves as a base for comments are fair and constructive so people can become better writers. Best of all it’s free and other writers can benefit from the exposure of being in the one of the top 1.2 million web sites in the world.   So get your ideas and pens ready for the Free Open Poetry Forum on The World of Words by Elias Tobias.

This key is a mystery

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This key is a mystery

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This key is a mystery

This key is a mystery to me.
It seems like I should have the master,
since it looks a copy, but it goes to
nothing that I use or own.
Does someone or something else have
the master and this is a riddle for me to solve
as I go along my life’s path?
Are the distinct cuts on both sides
of the shaft a secret code to the ups
and downs fate has in store, and the
slants, the transitions I have yet to make?
It’s a modern key, not one of the universal
skeleton keys for doors to old homes and such.
Is it a key that that will start a new
car or open a new house? Is it a key to an
old closet that will transport me
to a whole new world with other
characters in the back of clothes?
Perhaps I should just throw it away,
and give someone a chance at the
unknown opportunities. Maybe not.

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December 20, 2011

A Christmas Card 2011

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A Christmas Card 2011

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(Photo by Phil Piercey)

This year has been a challenge for all of us with changes in the economy and with our families.  Both Patty and I still have our jobs and home, but members of our family passed away; however we still have much to celebrate this season.  We wish all the readers of the World of Words by Elias Tobias a great Christmas and we would like to thank everyone for your continued support of this project.  Perhaps the New Year will bring changes to this blog as time and energy permits.

December 4, 2011

Old-Fashioned Love

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Old-Fashioned Love

Hey, I know things between us aren’t just right,
Ever since we had our last little fight.
But I want you to know that I’ve see the light,
And I know our future’s gonna be bright.
I’d like to show you some old-fashion love tonight.
Give me one more chance, and I know now
Our love for each other will be outta sight.

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View from the other side of the tracks

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View from the other side of the tracks

Who are you to tell me what to do?
Do think I’m some kind of fool?
I know lots of things, even though I
didn’t have the money to go to school.
Besides, are you the one who makes the rules?
What in the hell makes you so cool?
I have lots of people I call friends, too.
Don’t bother me anymore, or else I’ll sue.

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Pregame coverage

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Pregame coverage

Listen to me good Jake,
If you don’t hurry, you’re gonna be late.
There’s no reason for you to miss this date.
So Joe, don’t be slow and run to the
Corner so you can meet the bus, Gus.
Never mind you givin’ me any fuss,
‘Cause there’s someone waitin’ for you.
If you don’t see her, you’re the fool.
Bein’ alone at night is not too cool.
Hey Stan, look right and be the man.
By now you should have some plan,
And tell her where you and her stand.
You know we all have your back, Jack,
And maybe this time it will last.
She’s not like the one’s in your past.

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November 26, 2011

Tomorrow’s another day

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Tomorrow’s another day

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Residents of an Indianapolis apartment complex begin their day and the sun starts its daily ascent into the sky.

Tomorrow’s another day 

You think you have problems,
And mountains grow from mole hills.
Then  you go see your doctor,
And solutions are sold in a pill.
You wonder if there is another way,
But tomorrow’s another day.
Tomorrow’s another day,
A chance to make a change,
Try something new, or extend your range.
Tomorrow’s another day,
A time to take away all the pain,
Help someone, or win the big game.
Tomorrow’s another day.

You think your problems are hopeless,
But there’s always someone who’s worse.
The situation compounds in interest,
And your history is a curse.
There’s nothing left to say,
But tomorrow’s another day.
Relationships can be difficult
When it come to affairs of the heart.
Sometimes you feel it all should end,
Or want to know how to start.
It’s hard not to let feelings go astray.
But tomorrow’s another day.
Tomorrow’s another day,
A chance to make a change,
Try something new, or extend your range.
Tomorrow’s another day,
A time to take away all the pain,
Help someone, or win the big game.
Tomorrow’s another day.

There’s a possibility of help,
But first you need to learn to give.
Only then will you we the light
And begin a better way to live.
Maybe your problems will fade away,
And tomorrow’s another day.
Tomorrow’s another day,
A chance to make a change,
Try something new, or extend your range.
Tomorrow’s another day,
A time to take away all the pain,
Help someone, or win the big game.
Tomorrow’s another day.
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